What Should I Do Then? ? ? Poem by Luwi Habte
What Should I Do Then? ? ?
With my own property
And my own destiny
I will be able
To see you invisible
What should I do then?
When I need your help suddenly
Who is going to support me when I cry daily?
For sure am going to miss you
I will be able to see you invisible my boo
What should I do then?
When I am suffering through the trouble makers
Who is going to write the notice of my clearance by a marker?
You have a space which is most valuable
But as soon as possible I will be able to see you invisible
What should I do then?
Me love!
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4/24/2024 8:02:04 AM # 1.0.0.1119
you are a good writer, good ideas, can put words together, nice writings but you are writing about the same over and over.you, him, when, where, how you know. go to the next step and put your thoughts somewhere else, the moon, the mountains, you know something diferent, people loves variety. read about great writers like pablo neruda, and people like him and you will become a better writer. good job.dont stop, and keep it up. i hope my advices are helpful! !