What Shall I Serve You? Poem by Valsa George

Really enjoyed this poem. Words are a great sustenance for the mind.

So original as the story unfolds with inspired lines you dish up a feast of your great talent with your poetry! Outstanding write!

In poetry's platter I shall serve my thoughts warm, Garnered in the lonely hours Of my solitude! The only dish I have! A love gift in the shape f a beautiful poem written with the sincerity of heart.Well expressed. I enjoyed it Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

Wow! The only dish... hah! appease caught me off-guard this is a keeper

a well written poem Valsa a metaphor well written nice

What a unique and wonderful thought. Poetry can feed the soul, mind and body. Its wonderful attributes can make us full. Its encompassing features, we will never ask for more. A clever poem, brilliantly conveyed and crafted. To my Poem List.

Now abruptly when you announce your arrival I feel excited and equally perplexed What shall I serve you? I am at a loss My hearth has not been lighted for long And my kitchen pots remain empty......what a touching inscription with wonderful imagery! A beautiful poem with nice concluding is well executed.

Nice thoughts in the grocery of poetry is the best service to a special guest, but he should be a special guest like me.

you can’t fool me, Valsa, I know the groceries and butchers and bakers in your town. your house is FULL of delectable treats to serve whomever you wish! ! ! ! I shall insist on nothing less, as your guest, than a full menu of fine Indian foods. if I have to, I’ll put up with: Chinese, French, Italian, Brazilian, Mexican, ‘American’, Ethiopian, or Peruvian cuisine. you may read your poetry to me as I dine. bri :)

Thank you Valsa for this exquisite meal you have prepared for us all. 'laughing wings', 'brooding shadows', and 'poetry's platter' all have a unique and fulfilling taste. Now I need to read another of your poems for desert.