What's The Use In Getting Old Poem by Juan Olivarez

What's The Use In Getting Old

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I can't see for the life of me,
What's the use in getting old.
I need reading glasses when I read and write,
And my bones hurt with the cold.

My hair once auburn now is white,
And receding every day.
my hearing's not what it once was,
And my beard's a shade of grey.

My bones hurt when I rise at dawn,
And when I go to bed.
I wonder if things will improve,
On the day that life has fled.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
7/18/13 Alton Texas
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 July 2013

self-pity is the best form of humor and this excellent work is replete with it.

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R.j. Wynn 07 August 2013

Getting old ain't for sissies and the meds don't help. Great poem. I relate.

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Valerie Dohren 02 August 2013

Oh very good Juan, and I can definitely relate to this. We can be sure that things will improve when life has fled!

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Smoky Hoss 30 July 2013

Ah good one pardner, I understand man. Perhaps, just perhaps, the use of gettin' old is to reach the point -because of all the lacks and loses- one can learn to take life as she comes at us, good n bad n ugly, no matter which horse she rides, cause we done been-there, done-that, etc... plus, maybe just ta help the kids n grand kids learn how to ride that rough ole bronc of living, and help em get back in the saddle a bit easier when they get throwed off. Great writing -as always- pal. Peace.

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Heather Wilkins 25 July 2013

ha ha we are suffering from the same symptoms. I see no real cause for all this change. Lets just be young and happy. a good read

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Heather Wilkins 25 July 2013

ha ha we are suffering from the same symptoms. I see no real cause for all this change. Lets just be young and happy. a good read

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