What Makes Me Poem by Rose Bloodthorn

What Makes Me

Rating: 3.5


Without my family I wouldn't know love, only heart break.
If my friends weren't here I'd be alone, only half a person.
Without creative words to lift me up I wouldn't wonder to the next page in life. 
If there was no music I'd be plain and pointless.
Even if just for a moment music solves the probablems of the day.
The next page in life might be upsetting  to read but I will finish this book.
My friends lend me a shoulder to cry on.
My family Lets me be who I am and will never discard me for that.
Without earth I wouldn't beable to breath, there would be no sunshine keeping my heart warm, no water to wash away the pain and start anew,
I would have no ground to stand on I'd fall into darkness.
These are the things that keep my spirit alive and make me who I am.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 24 August 2013

Family and friends can be there for us when we need them the most. A great poem.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 24 August 2013

a debt acknowledged poetically! well done, Rose.

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