What Makes It? Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

What Makes It?

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What makes it?

brick concrete
paints tiles
happy faces
joyous smiles

sadness mirth
decor art
death and birth
broken heart

an off road nest
for flyer's rest
living hour
sweet and sour

a gifted cause
for lodging pause

what makes it?

a home?

Thursday, August 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: home
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 08 August 2014

A nice introspective poem..........subtle queries need creative answers......well composed

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Lorraine Colon 07 August 2014

Love is the most important component. When that is present, everything else falls into place. It can be a shack in ruins or a mansion - love makes it feel like home.

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