What Makes Bri 'Feel Good'....[personal] Poem by Bri Edwards

What Makes Bri 'Feel Good'....[personal]

Rating: 5.0


I'll start with what makes me feel good, this windy, rainy night:
A recently showered and shampooed body; a 'clean shave'; electric light;
A moderately heated room; making rhymes; ....a sated appetite;
A kind and caring wife who 'forgives' me; underwear that's not too tight;

Being retired from post office and being paid for staying home;
Having good enough health; still having hair to brush or comb;
Getting under down comforter on our marriage mattress of foam;
Seeing lots of kinds of birds when outdoors i do roam;

Trimming annoying branches over sidewalks where i walk;
Keeping in touch with special friends via email or phone talk;
Finishing home projects using nails, shovel, or caulk;
Seeing 'attractive' women...though at them i don't gawk;

Giving a helpful answer when someone asks directions;
The yummy taste in my mouth...when i eat confections;
Deciding who to vote for in the upcoming elections;
Not needing, at age 63, to maintain 'too many erections';

Eating ice cream (neopolitan is especially good) :
Donating blood for others as often as i could;
And listening with aki to an owl hooting from a darkened woods.

(2012)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
true. 'good' equals 'happy' or contented. see my poem 'what makes bri feel bad' also....if you wish. 'bad' equals 'unhappy' or upset.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clarence Prince 01 October 2015

Giving a helping answer when someone asks directions, that's fine! Eating ice cream that's even better! Thanks for sharing, Bri!

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Akhtar Jawad 25 July 2015

An interesting poem letting us how Bri can be made happy.

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