What Love Did To Me... [response To R.K. Hart's Ph Poem 'My Love Flies'; Husbandhood; Very Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

What Love Did To Me... [response To R.K. Hart's Ph Poem 'My Love Flies'; Husbandhood; Very Short]

Rating: 4.8


Love made this 'GIANT' a 'wimp'.
In lieu of running, now I limp.
Once again I'm JUST a little boy,
as my “Love” treats me....just like a toy!

If younger, I might be more manly.
Now I behave much more blandly.
Though my 'home-boss' may lack glamor,
she ain’t at all short …on CLAMOR!
And my heart might now take flight....., IF.....
it were not filled.....with so much fright!

(July 30, 2015)

Thursday, July 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
R.K.Hart aka Ray Hart wrote a lighthearted love poem, beginning with these words:

“Love makes giants out of wimps, men out of boys. Young men feel more manly, young women feel more glamorous. Love makes the heart take flight.”

my poem is part of my poem comment on his poem. :) bri
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 10 August 2015

I really like this poem....There is something just so epic about it. It hints at a journey....Great poem. A 10.

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Eugene Levich 07 August 2015

Join the club, Brisco!

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Jak Black 01 August 2015

Ha ha! You're letting the side down Bri......... Women, the stronger of the sexes, Bri knows, he’s had three exes. Bri is trembling, he’s so afraid, ‘Cause number four must be obeyed.

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