What Is Life? Poem by Abha Sharma

What Is Life?

Rating: 3.3


Living
A breath in trance;
With
An incessant struggle;
Towards
An elfin joy;
For
An eternal hope;
Abides
A phenomenal routine;
Scrapped
A chronicle’s page;
Inspiring
Another breath in trance.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 24 April 2008

A breath in trance...... splendid line. Inspirational piece Abha

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Sadiqullah Khan 25 April 2008

i invite you for a cup of coffee tonght :)

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Poras Sharma 25 April 2008

simply superb. Hope to follow in ur footsteps some day...

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Craig Anderson 28 April 2008

Very peaceful piece. If only everyone thought like you my friend. Regards Craig.

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Sadiqullah Khan 28 April 2008

good rythm abha, , , , , ,

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Deepti Agarwal 15 October 2008

Hey is LFE really like this? ? wonderful that we still have life..

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premji premji 14 August 2008

I wish life would have been like this... but in rality, it's a never ending itch!

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Greenwolfe 1962 26 July 2008

'A breath in trance '. What do I make of this? I find this to be a more fascinating question than the one which inspired it. Perhaps, it is known in the east. In the west, there is no life or' breath in trance'. If I see a' breath in trance ', I shall tell you. That you will know that there is still life in the west. GW62

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premji premji 08 June 2008

Dear Abhaji, Well written.... Here in Cochin, everything is a mess... So I feel: Life is a neverending itch!

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Raj Nandy 29 May 2008

Beautiful thoughts expressed in beautiful lines; 10/10! - Raj Nandy 30 May 08

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