What Is A Poem, The King Asked Poem by Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India

What Is A Poem, The King Asked

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What is a poem, the king asked,
And the poet replied, see, it is
A bomb that can destroy anything
Including your own kingdom.
The king ordered to destroy the poem
And the poet said, just wait a minute,
Before destroying kindly read it out
Yourself and understand the meaning therein.

Wednesday, September 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poems
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Osazee Dankaro 22 September 2016

The first eight lines of the poem are fantastic. The poet needs to work on the other lines and makenit meaningful.

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Eugene Levich 22 September 2016

This is a fine, imaginative, poem with, alas, one slight error in English usage. In the 11th line, the word Could should be changed to Were. Perhaps, even better, that line should read, Could not make the king awake.

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Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
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