What I Seek? Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

My eyes stopped and took me by surprise, Alighted from winged plane to rise, I wondered and thought step so wise, One should come here and improvise,

that's what everyone seek for.. well written Sir.

'No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing' this is the wish of every man sir....but there are always difficulties tho... you may have written from your personal experience, but it is very universal.... cause what do we want? what do we need? that s a question we ask ourselves everyday..10+++

Very good poem! ! ! Enjoyed it a lot. I give it a 10.

No regrets, no feelings to amend, Continue to seek blessings with sincere pretend, finally blessing with earnest prayer.... what a lovely presentation... good write too and deserves...10

You definitely detect the vainness of ego living!

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing,

Very poignant! A good write! Nice to go through the poem with a message.

Wished that Life should have hard going, No vehicle or rope just to toe the Boeing, Why I need continuous pet on back

What I wished throughout life? No trouble, nice spending with wife, Children just before eyes playing, I knell down before HIM and praying, ....10