What I Need Poem by Akhtar Jawad

What I Need

Rating: 5.0


Beauty is scattered,
Even in a particle,
Below my boots,
What I need,
Just the eyes,
That can see.

Pretty is the man,
Even my enemy,
Critical and violent,
With a reason or not,
What I need,
Just to react friendly.

Lovely is someone,
That hates me always,
Condemns all my acts,
What I need,
Just a loving heart,
That can love him, too.

Light is flowing,
In all the rivers,
Seen or unseen,
What I need,
Some courage to swim,
May be it water or the fire!

The ocean is the same,
From East to West,
Different names at places,
What I need,
To fall in the ocean,
And forget myself.

Thursday, September 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: me
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I may not mend you but I can mend me at any time, and that is my basic need.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Somanathan Iyer 11 September 2014

A nice poem extolling tolerance at all levels. nice write.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 September 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Salini Nair 11 September 2014

beautiful...need to find the charm around us................

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Valsa George 11 September 2014

Beauty is scattered all around! What we need are eyes to enjoy it and hearts large enough to accommmodate both friends and enemies! We can hardly change others, but we can always change ourselves if we are determined! Lofty thoughts, Akhtarji!

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Khalida Bano Ali 11 September 2014

Light is flowing, In all the rivers, Seen or unseen, What I need, Some courage to swim, May be it water or the fire! A sufi like views, liked it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 July 2022

Superb! Loved the way the poet has depicted the theme.5 stars

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Khalid Saifullah 30 October 2017

a beautiful poem....................................................

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Charity Nduhiu 16 September 2014

Keep moving on don't fall into the ocean the world needs you. Nice poem

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Lyn Paul 13 September 2014

I too like the way you presented these words from your heart. Thank you

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Geetha Jayakumar 13 September 2014

Thoughtful write. Very true said in each lines.....I need eyes to see and a loving heart to love all.One cannot change anyone but one can surely change self, which is the biggest challenge in life..Loved the way you presented it so well. Thanks for sharing.

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