Treasure Island

Megan Reily


What I Hope


I hope you're happy
I hope you're proud
I hope you know how I felt
When you said 'Three's a crowd'

I don't hope you suffer
I don't hope you die
But I hope you know it's your fault
I can no longer fly

I hope you can feel
I hope you can see
I hope you get abandoned
Like you did to me

I hope you know you succeeded
I hope you know you won
I hope you know you broke me
I still can't see the sun

I will leave it at that
Even though there is more
Like all the pain
I have yet to thank you for

Submitted: Thursday, January 01, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, February 03, 2009

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  • Daniel 110 (2/6/2009 9:01:00 PM)

    Beautifully written! This is truly a wonderful and powerful poem. I look forward to reading many more from you. (Report) Reply

  • Martha Rivera (1/8/2009 6:59:00 PM)

    I feel like i can connect with your poem. It can also be taken a number of ways. I personally take it as if the girl was talking to the guy who hurt her. I hope to read more of your poem in the future (Report) Reply

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