Treasure Island

Lucy Grainger


What He Means To Me!


I couldn't stand to see him get hurt or lose him.
I don't want him to feel like i used him.
I'd hate to be the one to bruise him.
He is the answer to my prayers and he's climbed the stairs to my heart.
I dream of him at night until my computer's back in sight.
His messages bring light to my dark world.
I miss him when he's offline but he's constantly online in my head.
I don't wish to hug him, i wish to do alot more.
I want his muscly arms to send away my quarms.

Submitted: Friday, February 22, 2013
Edited: Saturday, February 23, 2013

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  • John Westlake (3/2/2014 1:21:00 AM)

    Sounds like you actually love whoever this was about. Don't let people put you down about your work. If they don't appreciate it, fine others will. And even if they don't I do (Report) Reply

  • Steve Yeager (3/11/2013 8:36:00 PM)

    It's an okay poem I guess. It doesn't matter what the viewer thinks, just the poets feeling put into his/her work's' makes it the best poem ever written. Just think about it, not many people express their feelings through poetry.

    ~Steve (Report) Reply

  • Titi Dale (2/22/2013 5:40:00 PM)

    This is perfect :) you express your love beautifully and this poem itself is beautiful: -) wonderful writing, Luce: P (Report) Reply

  • Sandy Player (2/22/2013 11:51:00 AM)

    I like the line where it says hes constantly online in my head. The parrallels and comparisons used once for a sentence is something you do often; you should be proud that you have a style. (Report) Reply

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