What Happend? Poem by zainab zaheen
What Happend?
Everyone says we learn from our mistakes,
but why do we get judged for the mistakes we make.
why is that the world is so unfair,
everyone goes on thinking about them selves.
no matter how hard you work there is always that some one that puts you down.
i don't want to be in this world filled with people who lie and deceive just for their benefit.
just look at how our world has become with all the hate, anger, the evil thoughts, the pain and suffering.
what happened to all the love, joy and happiness in the world.
why cant we spend our time helping and caring for each other.
is that so wrong?
we are living in a world which will soon belong to our children and our children's children.
is this what we want to bring them out to.
if this is how its going to be
i would rather stay in a room and dedicate my self to god and wait for death to come.
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By Zainab Zaheen, © 2011, All rights reserved
By Zainab Zaheen, © 2011, All rights reserved
Very well written poem (: it is sad to think what the world is coming to these days, and your poem captures it perfectly. I find the beginning the most amazing, because it is true we learn from our mistakes! But there are people in this world who are cold and ignorant of that fact, mainly because someone has been equally ignorant to them. Your cry of injustice is crystal clear. Very well defined! People can learn a lot from a poem like this (:
I know that the people in this world can be very cruel but I refuse to stay in my room. I will not stand by and do nothing with the gifts God gave me to make a difference.
What a paradox of life! A perfect poem in disarray world...thanks you and God bless...10 +++
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4/19/2024 5:14:11 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Your poems sound like your a person who would love to make the world a better place. good job. One of the best poetry's we can find in helping the world is the oldest book ever written - the Bible.