What Colour Does Love Paint In? Poem by Theresa Minu Dominic

What Colour Does Love Paint In?

Rating: 5.0


Red, said zara.
Red of lips that've just been kissed.
The red of unmade cheeks
Where passion and restrain wage wars unseen.

But, then I saw her lying dead,
Her love unreturned,
Her passion unperturbed.

I looked for the red on her unkissed lips.
I looked for the red from the unseen wars.
I saw the red on her forlorn form.
The blood that wet her undone hair.

Yellow, said the Sunflower -
Yellow of a sunny summer day.
I watched her as she danced in joy-
Drinking in her lover's sight,
Fluttering coyly as he smiled.

Then, i saw him leave,
His blithe yellow, now a sober hue
Of orangish smoke and steamy blue:
The masterpiece he made to bid his bye.

Her merry petals, now a heap of brown,
The Sunflower heaved a cold, cold sigh
And laid her head on her crumpled fronds -
An ode to love that wilts with time.

Friday, June 1, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain,truth,love,love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theresa Minu Dominic 29 June 2012

Thank you, Kate. Thank you, everybody. I've written quite a few poems after this one.

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Kate Thwaite 28 June 2012

I like this very much.Good imagery and thoughtful

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Theresa Minu Dominic 01 June 2012

Yes, it is. Thank you so much for all the appreciation. Criticism is also eagerly looked forward to.

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Saadat Tahir 01 June 2012

beautiful imagery, artistry, metaphor and a clear capability to do some nice poetry. loved the run and flow. nice poetry :)

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Neela Nath Das 01 June 2012

Heart touching.U have presented it with a tone of reality.

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