.........What Are You Waiting For? ......... Poem by .Pd. is here
.........What Are You Waiting For? .........
God didn’t gift
The twigs to the crow
To make his nest.
What are you waiting for?
God didn’t carve out
The meandering path
Of the Ganges.
What are you waiting for?
God didn’t work
On caterpillars behalf
To help it become a beautiful butterfly.
What are you waiting for?
God didn’t gift
You a cushioned butt
To sit on it and create castles in the air.
Then what are you waiting for?
(28 August 2006)
Gems are springing out..that also on a Monday! ! Good going...keep it up! !
A 10 from me for your short but highly educative poem.
hey a nice inspiration for those who havent tried at all n those too who are waiting for the other chance n also those who have given up b4 d ryt time.. gr8 one.. smiles, krishna
yes what we waiting for. good point. something to think about. nice write.
hey preets...wonderful way of explicating 'god helps those who helps themselves.' the images u used r gonna linger on in ur reader's mind... :)
MOTIVATIONAL MONOLOGUE? lol I like the concept...very intruiging piece, Preeti ''''''''''''''''''''FJR
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 9:54:01 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This one is just tooooooooo good.... effectively carried the message across the forum like a dart on the board - bull's eye. Very effective writing and the style enviable! GOOD WORK....... deservingly 10.