What Are You Thinking? Poem by Shelley L Baxter

What Are You Thinking?

Rating: 5.0


Expectations high...
so high you are all alone.
Still, you think your right?

Written July 16th 2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 16 July 2007

I am thinking about evrything! i love this..reminds me to think about my loved ones! thanks for this..nice..hmmm

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Dr.subhendu Kar 18 March 2008

as when thinking right lonliness is the route...............superb thought,10/10, well penned, thanks for asharing

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Scott Austin 23 July 2007

Shelley, this is very direct and to the point and speak with great wisdom, may your heart be filled with peace and joy each and everyday. Scott

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David Harris 22 July 2007

Shelley so much said in so few words. Top marks from me and thanks for sharing them my friend. David

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Geoff Warden 21 July 2007

Very nice hyku..... well versed... count on target... and does leave an interesting afterthought... absolutly perfected....

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Meggie Gultiano 16 July 2007

I am thinking about evrything! i love this..reminds me to think about my loved ones! thanks for this..nice..hmmm

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Shelley L Baxter

Shelley L Baxter

Calgary, Canada.
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