What A Silly Thing? Poem by Mahfooz Ali

What A Silly Thing?

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Aaaaah! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Finally I got a ticket to my dream,
I travelled in the adventure of me against,
many small flying things.
For I became a slayer with the famous killer hit,
Just one slap, they were scattered around my feet.


What a silly thing?

MOSQUITOES! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Monday, November 26, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: small
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Oh my, a bit amusing, I'm glad I rarely deal with mosquitos.

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Kavya Manjusha 14 August 2009

macchar maar... ha ha ha ha ha. good one... 'ada'

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Carmen Johnson 01 April 2009

You know you can write anything if you can write about misquotos and it be good. Good enjoyable write.

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Adeline Foster 30 March 2009

I got a chuckle out of that. Perhaps some day you may try it in Guyana. If so teach me how. Adeline

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Nia Riz 20 December 2008

HAHAHA...loool.....funny..., .nice humour....lol

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

lol.......very very funny...loved it

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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