What A Difference A Day Make Poem by calvin hines

What A Difference A Day Make



What a difference a day make
24 little hours
here comes the sun and flowers
where there used to be rain
but insted, the flowers wilted
and the sun hid behind a cloud
the thunder roared
and the lightning crashed
the rain poured, soaking the concrete until
the sand took it's original form
and turn back to mush
an emotional downpour of pain
all in day, Love's joy turns into Love's sacrifice
and the heart that beats for life, now beats for death
death, cause the heart can't stand to live
without the one it beats for
knowing that the love it gives, won't be returned
24 little hours
smiles turn to frowns, birds don't sing
eyes don't sparkle, but tear up at the fact that
sadness has fallen and the settling is done
the happiness is gone
cause once you settle, your not yourself anyway!
so was they worth it?
is that person worth settling for
if so try die'n, It's Painless! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Josephine De Leux 11 June 2009

very true.24 hours...seems mighty long when you think about it.24. some grammatical errors, i think(insted = instead, make=makes(or is the deliberate?)) , but good poem.

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