Well...You Wanted My Advice! Poem by Viola Grey

Well...You Wanted My Advice!

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Once again, he slices the open wound
allowing entry to your heart
never enabling that same scab
to metamorphose into a scar.
Once again, with a bleeding soul,
I listen to your tears
numbing my opinions voice
so all I do is hear.
How can someone so alive
allow themselves to die
inside the grip of masochistic
ideals uncovered so pessemistic.
I really do love you
and burried, shallow, is my heart
but this clever mind shatters
at how silly you are.
Once again, I implore you
to hear that voice within.
Heal that wound upon your heart
never again allowing him in.

2/6/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tony Jolley 18 January 2009

There are so many thingss that one could say about this great poem, Vi, but for me (perhaps personal experience talking) it is the distinction between listening and hearing... lost on most! Tony

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Kris Smith 17 August 2008

And good advice to cleverly put my friend, problem is do we ever listen, sometimes maybe thanks Chris 10

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