Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 211 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Welcome(sorry for delay)


When this universe started to burn,
when the little rabbits faced with frown..
when we all look at the sky to see the sun,
a drop of God's soul......

when the jungles shout your name
when all the clouds danced with the stars
when Bellatrix confess that it doesn't have any light
against you.....

when you have been sent with a holy cart
when the sky opened his hugs
to leave you
it cried

but the earth and we,
we were happy...
the universe was calling the angels to dance
to break the rules and the balance

to embrace you with a light
a light from a shinning sight

happy birthday to the Eagles of the skies above.

Submitted: Friday, October 18, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, October 22, 2013
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Sorry for delay
my poem_gift for your passed birthday. hope to see you wearing that white holy cloth
:)

Comments about this poem (Welcome(sorry for delay) by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A) )

  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (10/18/2013 10:43:00 AM)

    Elliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! ! ! !
    i got surprised! ...thank you....it was one the best gifts i have ever received....really thanks bro!
    when the jungles shout your name
    oh! this line is my favorite line...i've got a special feeling about this line...as i love jungles...
    thank you for everything...and i will love u more and more.... (Report) Reply

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