Weakness Poem by foxy babii

Weakness

Rating: 4.5


Heavy eyes, heavy heart,
Crying out for strength
Does love have the power
To extend this length?

So weak, try to be strong
But still find a way to fall
I wonder now
Is there a way to conquer at all?

I see the cliff, feel the edge
Yet do not back away
Fear has stricken me inside
This picture can’t portray

Agony, humiliation and hate
I collapse into the air
Carrying only me
To a death beyond repair

Arms extended, tears for help
Pray one hears, my silent talk
I cry for strength
If only just to turn and walk

Foxiibabii
7/12/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 24 December 2017

A nice poetic imagination, foxy. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Richard Howardson 23 September 2009

Nice one. Some good effort over there. can get the feeling...gr8

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