We'll Create Our Own Poem by Samuel Segun Toluwalase

We'll Create Our Own



They chase out
And try to pull us apart
They may scream and shout
And bid us depart

Love ties us
Makes us
Binds us
It will keep us

We will leave their world
They can have it
We will create our world
And nurture it

As long as am with you
Nothing else matters
I know you feel so too
You are all that matters
In our perfect world
One we've always known
We will never need to face them alone
They can have their world

We may not be brave or strong or smart
But I know somewhere in our secret heart
That somehow we'll come through
For our love is true

We'll Create Our Own
Sunday, February 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darwin Henry Beuning 11 December 2017

Samuel, enjoyed reviewing your poem this morning. Suggest you change one word, change perfect to imperfect. We live in an imperfect world, but, if one finds true love, that is all that matters. I rate your poem a 10.

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