We Fight For Peace (C) 6-13-08 Poem by Zahir Kijani

We Fight For Peace (C) 6-13-08

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There's a word in the English language that goes by oxymoron
It's like when a saying contradicts itself and so forth and so on
Like how the US claims to fight for peace and serenity
But as a oxymoron its like they're having sex for virginity
Like taking a picture to forget a moment in time
Or like trying to rob a bank without committing a crime
Or like committing suicide all to enjoy life
Or bringing peace by the order of strife
I mean its crazy how the list can go on
In the way the U.S. is just a big Oxymoron
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Em Jay Christian 26 April 2010

This felt really forced. Like someone repeating someone else's words trying to make them sound better, and then calling them unique. I wasn't as impressed as I was with other pieces of yours. Em Jay

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Zahir Kijani

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Buffalo, New york
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