We Cannot Count The Stars Poem by Joshua Van Rostenberghe

We Cannot Count The Stars

Rating: 5.0


We can see the stars
But we cannot count them

If we do something good to people,
People will thank you

But we cannot count
how much people care and love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 26 March 2013

Hans VR sure proud of Joshua VR, as much as the Hans shower people mind with bright idea, you got the same spark in you...Keep on writing, let you grow up more in the next writes...and sure this is a great starter for you_Soul

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Gajanan Mishra 25 March 2013

True, what you are telling my dear poet. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Valerie Dohren 25 March 2013

Lovely little poem with much insight - welcome to Poemhunter Joshua, your father has taught you well. I shall look forward to reading more of your work. Well done.

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Hans Vr 25 March 2013

Congratulations on your first poem. Excellently written, great imagination Something really to be proud of.

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