We Are In Touch Poem by Sankar Sarkar

We Are In Touch

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We are in touch

We are in touch
And keep touching
Like the roots of a tree
Like a speck of dust
Like a drop of rain
Like spontaneous wave
And also like air
We are in touch everywhere,
Where is no body
There mind touches still
Where is no word
There two eyes stare
Like a star …..
All pains in breath
And all hopes in faith
Keep touching the life ever,
As silent as tears we
Are in touch with each other
Here and there everywhere

Tuesday, June 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 02 June 2015

We Are In Touch - is a deeply touchy poem with lovely similes. Thank you for your invitation; I very much enjoyed reading it.

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Melissa Tamayo 02 June 2015

Where is no word, there two eyes stare, wow nicley said... Deep description of what being in touch really means

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Bharati Nayak 02 June 2015

H ow deep a touch can be- - -All pains in breath And all hopes in faith Keep touching the life ever As silent as tears we Are in touch with each other Really a marvelous write.Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 02 June 2015

~~Nicely penned sentiments, Akash. We are all one people, one with the universe and the sooner we realize this, the better. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Kelly Kurt 02 June 2015

~`~~Nicely penned sentiments, Akash. We are all one people, one with the universe and the sooner we realize this, the better. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Hazel Durham 07 June 2015

Stunning love poem with inspired lines that cries with the ache of passion and desire and smiles at the beautiful reality!

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Nice poem.. of human life...10 We feel fragrance Of human life at once Even though it remains in peril We come out of it at strong will

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Allotey Abossey 06 June 2015

This's a biut'ful piece of poetry, nicely penned and touching. God bless you my friend

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 June 2015

All pains in breath with the muse of life. Nice work.

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Raymond Farrell 03 June 2015

In a sense this reflects the univeral brotherhood of all mankind and it is important for us all to understand this and try and help each other regardless of our ethnicity etc.

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