Jessica HernandezDamian

Rookie - 9 Points (10/04/1994 / Salinas)

Waves Of The Ocean - Poem by Jessica HernandezDamian

When I see the ocean
I see my dreams
I love watching the
ocean It like I was
splash in the ocean
of my dreams
every time a wave
comes it like
I made one of
my dreams
when I see the ocean
I see my failure
I have done
when a small wave comes
It like I had made a
mistake of my life
when a big wave comes
it like I got up and
continue living my
life I just follow
the waves of the
ocean to make
my dreams come
true Follow the ocean
of dreams


Comments about Waves Of The Ocean by Jessica HernandezDamian

  • Rookie - 297 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/12/2014 9:24:00 AM)

    a thought-provoking and interesting poem...well done! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 118 Points Yash Shinde (5/7/2014 10:55:00 PM)

    Life flows like ocean, isn't it............? .....
    lovely! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,873 Points Herbert Guitang (4/25/2014 1:11:00 AM)

    Life is like the waves on the ocean that flows down and up. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,369 Points John Westlake (4/23/2014 6:29:00 PM)

    Oceans of dreams? ? Well put. I would love to see the ocean of your dreams at some point (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 25, 2014


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