Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,733 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Water Paint - Poem by Aftab Alam

More chaos more agitation
We all are tied with the wave
Enough we lived here
Spoiled earth and atmosphere
Enough we suffered with humiliation
No building needs I, running unto cave

There is going to be a war for water
Water painting, for red


Comments about Water Paint by Aftab Alam

  • Gold Star - 16,965 Points * Sunprincess * (3/9/2014 9:22:00 PM)

    .......yes water is our most valued resource...enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 91 Points Kayla Daley (2/21/2014 5:00:00 PM)

    this is very brilliant and deep I love it but I hate war I am partial to being a pacifist (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 91 Points Kayla Daley (2/21/2014 4:59:00 PM)

    this is very brilliant and deep I love it but I hate war I am partial to being a pacifist (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,357 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/29/2013 10:42:00 PM)

    War for water is another thing to worry about. Nice poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 74 Points Tapashya Das (12/27/2013 6:07:00 AM)

    its a pleasure reading your poems sir! there is bounty of thoughts and lot many things in your poems to learn... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 827 Points Yasmeen Khan (12/22/2013 12:35:00 AM)

    Ah, you are going to flee away into a cave..........why so disillusioned? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, December 20, 2013


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