Water Falls Poem by Louis Borgo
Water Falls
'I need it cold' (how cold) , so cold that i can't feel my neck caps! ! ! ,
I need it so cold i forget this touch of a feeling.
Like the tracks of a huskie sparkling of crystal, clear so clear of a mountain i need it cold! ! ! ,
Like hand of a shuttle, settle free, empty barrels, like the softest place on earth.... of dropp of rain on the back of the porch....
'Honey Im Home'
'I need it cold'
But how cold is cold...
Refreshing is water and refreshing is poetry...
Enjoyed this one, Louis. There's no way though that I would like it cold! I prefer the heat of an Arizona sun, over 100 degrees is good for me. You do make the cold sound beautiful though - Like the tracks of a Huskie sparkling of crystal, clear so clear of a mountain I need it cold! ! ! Very good poem, Louis. Thank you, RoseAnn
The sensation of temperture. The contrast was well worked. RAB
I like this poem. I think sometimes we forget to appreciate the cold. honey I'm home suggests a place where it is warm. With the cold, we appreciate the warmth! Thanks for poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/20/2024 3:14:35 PM # 1.0.0.1119
great poem. totally loved it.