Watching Her Daddy Come Poem by sania harris

Watching Her Daddy Come

Rating: 4.7


The cherry wind stroke her face
Shuffling her locks aside
With a beaming smile she sat awake
To watch her daddy come

Her scenic eyes were going scarlet
And often she closed them soft
But nothing stopped her blue eyes wide
To watch her daddy come

She fell tired every minute or two
And again she wakes to look
With a longing face and crimson eyes
To watch her daddy come

Today or tomorrow, he may come she knew
With loads of sweets and candy
To receive with hugs and sugary kisses
She waited for him alone

When time goes by, she will fall asleep
And wake up a bright new day
She will forget about her daddy to come
And will drowse in her games along the bay

When the lights go off and the smile fades off
She goes to her ancient window
With a longing face and crimson eyes
To watch her daddy come



February 9,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Some Poems 08 October 2008

I really liked it but would have liked to see all of the stanzas finshed with the line 'to watch her daddy come' i thought that line was used well through out the poem. but it still worked great.9

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Hana K 09 October 2008

i like this one it's sad but good, just like your other poems they're so beautiful

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 04 November 2008

well done, beautiful thanks for sharing

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 04 November 2008

This is an intimate family set, described with delicacy, innocence and feeling.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 04 November 2008

this is really good, a bit like one of my poems, where were you for a 14 year old, you are talented one line was a tiny bit longer to read- if that makes sense, but apart from that, you are great with writing a promising poet :) 10 for effort and opinion :)

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Rita Hawkins 26 December 2008

just yet one more great poem, bravo.

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Kelvin Karani 14 December 2008

keep writing girl. i see you somewhere, i mean, when all is done with down here, you could be the next yeats, or just sania great in your own right! how about that?

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Joseph Poewhit 01 December 2008

Good Daddy's are important in a girls life

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Ravi Sathasivam 30 November 2008

A nice poem with meaningful deliverance. Great write my friend. Keep up

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Madison Yeater 30 November 2008

very nice. no words can describe the beauty of this poem.

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