Was She Weak Or Was I Strong Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Was She Weak Or Was I Strong

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Was she weak or was I strong
I let her lead me in.
Out side her door I stood upright
narrow were the sides.

There I feel like no one else
here elsewhere I am not.
So was I week or was she strong
I can not show a doubt.

Friday, November 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: green
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2015

Very amazing drafting shared really. Wisely drafted poem shared.10

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M Asim Nehal 27 November 2015

This is for you to decide who was weak and who was strong yet poem was strong enough for 10 points.

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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