Was It All Lies Poem by Lost(The Vampiric angel)

Was It All Lies

Rating: 4.3


was everything u told me a lie
all the I LOVE YOUS,
The I WANNA BE WITH YOU FOREVER,
and even theI WANNABE THERE FOR YOU
WHEN YOU NEED ME
were they all lie...
but the strang thing is
that I still
LOVE YOU
is it because im just a fool or is
it because i truly loved you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

deep I like it :) good job..... :)

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Anjali Sinha 19 October 2009

wow beautiful i love this keep sharing

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Emma Smahlt 20 October 2009

i really love this one! ! ! ! great job! ! ! keep writing! ! !

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Vinod Kumar 22 October 2009

Sharp responses beyond imagination... Nice,10

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Merna Ibrahim 22 October 2009

Lovely piece! ! ...keep it up..10 Merna.

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Seraphim Foxette 01 March 2010

i want to send this to my exboyfriend. its a great expression of how i feel. i can never do things like this i dont like thinking about breakups

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Black Rose Dimitris 22 February 2010

sumthing like this was hard for me to say also to rite, where you took it out for me it seems, .....

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The Devils Girl 15 February 2010

i love this poem and i know how u feel believe me when my ex broke up with me my life just seemed to stop i hated him and yet i loved him. i have writen alot of poems like this one and i love it

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Iron Panda 23™ 11 February 2010

wow! ! not sure what more to say....but 10! ! !

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Shelby Alwaysconfused 05 January 2010

wow, a very touching read. great job. love, shelby

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