Caution yield right of way
Warning Danger
the signs were all blinded
by the sun in the sky
After you finally knew you
had won my heart was it
then that made you decide
your challange was over?
Living by all the rules, obliging
any and all rules of love never
seeing the Danger signs listed
my gurad rail of love collapsed
into your soul
Many years of loving is a lifetime
of devotion a sancation to harbor
a broken heart
Even with life taking its yield, and
its caution, and Danger, still could
not prevent nor guarentee a gift
of love, I know that now.............
A great piece of work Bonnie, I do like the way that you have used the highway as a metaphor for love. Very well written indeed. Love, Andrew xx
I like this poem. I tlike the way you used the road signs to protray what we all feel about love from time to time...
Make no mistake...The Ole cliche ''Love Is Blind'', is all too true to reality, and has no bias as to who this deadfall blinds.Great piece of work, young lady.Fluxive structure....Solid penning, indeed. ~ FjR ~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Holy toledo Bonnie, this one gave me chills. It is obviously written with heartfelt passion. Thank you for sharing my friend, as always your talent is inspiring :)