Warm, Balmy And Gentle Breezes Poem by Ernestine Northover

Warm, Balmy And Gentle Breezes

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Warm breezes glide across an open space,
with such invisible grace,
as if they were off on a chase,
wafting softly against my face,
with urgency to win an endless race.

Balmy breezes flow between large dense trees,
with such a veritable ease,
and one can tell, they do as they please,
tickling the feet, the legs and knees,
with urgency there’s a longing to tease.

Gentle breezes pass smoothly on their way,
with such a persistence, they play,
for to them it’s just another day,
they cannot stop and cannot stay,
with urgency they ruffle the rosebay.


© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Resplendent pictorial....In full efflorescence, here....as only Ernestine Northover Poetics knows how to pen....And this work, young lass....is a bonifide pen-gem! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 25 May 2008

Hey, hey, hey....it's Ernestine. Doing what Ernestine does best! Write 'classics'. You are soooo terrific.

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Andrew Blakemore 25 May 2008

A lovely piece again Ernestine and well done for adhering to this strict rhyming structure. Love Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 25 May 2008

I see the gentle breezes playing like young Children in the garden of your words Wonderful, fine poetry from a fine lady Love duncan X

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