Wanting Poem by Sandra Feldman

Wanting

Rating: 5.0


I want to cross the mountains.
I want to cross the sea,
I want you here forever,
Together, just with me.

I know this stupid stanza,
Can never, never be,
But Dreams are the bonanza,
Of those who drown at sea.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 01 October 2012

Thank you, Nurian for the wonderful compliments.

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Nurain Ali-balogun 01 October 2012

Wonderful, you make writing seem so easy with this piece. And the way you ended it with dreams being a bonanza to those who drown at sea is brilliant. Thumbs up.

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