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Wandering cloud

Relaxing in a lazy chair
Casuarina branches, painted on an ever blue sky
A breeze of traveling fresh air
A wondrous white cloud wanders by

Where it will go I am clueless
before long, all again is blueness
I feel a bit lost without
my wandering white wondrous cloud

Bachok,2010

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Submitted: Friday, May 21, 2010
Edited: Thursday, April 04, 2013


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  • Cristina Teodor (12/2/2011 4:59:00 AM)

    Great imagery, melodious verses creating a peaceful atmosphere..Cristina Teodor

    2 person liked.
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  • Jinal Oswal (9/15/2011 4:55:00 AM)

    It gives a relaxed feel, as well as leaves with thoughts wandering with the clouds. Keep up the good work :)

  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/6/2010 4:26:00 AM)

    A dreamy poem! Ifelt the mood. Enjoyed the read. Love: D

  • Onelia Avelar (5/25/2010 2:55:00 AM)

    ...Relaxing in a lazy chair.. with an only blanket - a white light cloud - very cozy atmosphere of the poem

  • Gita Ashok (5/24/2010 11:51:00 AM)

    This poem uses such beautiful imagery. After reading it, I began to see the 'wandering white wondrous cloud' in my mind. Enjoyed reading it.

  • Paul Judges (5/24/2010 4:18:00 AM)

    Delightfully written!

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/23/2010 1:36:00 PM)

    feel a bit lost without
    my wandering cloud

    sense of loss that you describes here is very true,
    write a poem with the theme sense of loss. innumerable incidents we have in life in which we feel this sense of loss. thank you for sharing. keep high ur poetic sense.

  • Kesav Easwaran (5/22/2010 8:16:00 AM)

    cloud is good poetic symbol...and its wandering my favourite subject...
    good poem Aufie...imaginative write...10

  • Sreekala Sukumaran (5/21/2010 8:55:00 AM)

    Where it will go I am clueless
    before long, all again is blueness
    I feel a bit lost without
    my wandering white wondrous cloud


    Though small its well said with beautiful meanings..especially the last two lines i liked very much can really feel it... Like to read more of your poems so keep writing....

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