Aufie Zophy

(18 October 1964)

Wandering cloud


Relaxing in a lazy chair
Casuarina branches, painted on an ever blue sky
A breeze of traveling fresh air
A wondrous white cloud wanders by

Where it will go I am clueless
before long, all again is blueness
I feel a bit lost without
my wandering white wondrous cloud

Bachok,2010

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Submitted: Friday, May 21, 2010
Edited: Thursday, April 04, 2013

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Jinal Oswal (9/15/2011 4:55:00 AM)

    It gives a relaxed feel, as well as leaves with thoughts wandering with the clouds. Keep up the good work :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Onelia Avelar (5/25/2010 2:55:00 AM)

    ...Relaxing in a lazy chair.. with an only blanket - a white light cloud - very cozy atmosphere of the poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Gita Ashok (5/24/2010 11:51:00 AM)

    This poem uses such beautiful imagery. After reading it, I began to see the 'wandering white wondrous cloud' in my mind. Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (5/23/2010 1:36:00 PM)

    feel a bit lost without
    my wandering cloud

    sense of loss that you describes here is very true,
    write a poem with the theme sense of loss. innumerable incidents we have in life in which we feel this sense of loss. thank you for sharing. keep high ur poetic sense. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/22/2010 8:16:00 AM)

    cloud is good poetic symbol...and its wandering my favourite subject...
    good poem Aufie...imaginative write...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Sreekala Sukumaran (5/21/2010 8:55:00 AM)

    Where it will go I am clueless
    before long, all again is blueness
    I feel a bit lost without
    my wandering white wondrous cloud


    Though small its well said with beautiful meanings..especially the last two lines i liked very much can really feel it... Like to read more of your poems so keep writing.... (Report) Reply

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