Walking On Air. Poem by Fay Slimm

Walking On Air.

Rating: 5.0


From deep blue mood
of try-and-try-again
daytime behaviour,
I sink in relief
to dark of the night.
.................
After starvation diet
of time without you,
come the dusk,
I feed to the full
on dreams of us two.
..................
Then fighting fit,
I feel you enter
under my skin,
permeate it,
fill my mind, and
begin to take me
to paradise.
...............
I melt within
passion's fire,
no need to
assure me
you are there,
Your nectar I liken
to drip of rare
rich and ripe,
ready fruit.
.................
Before I fly, with
my feet astride
shoulders of
strongest amore,
I am aware inside
I am walking
on air as before.
..................
And why?
because my love,
you are here,
and having you by,
nightime lonliness
has nothing to fear,
I just have to try.
.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 19 November 2009

Love these lines: Before I fly, with my feet astride shoulders of strongest amore, I am aware inside I am walking on air as before. It's like they're saying: catch me before I fall..(smile)

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Carol Gall 19 November 2009

such an amazing write fay 10

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Catrina Heart 03 December 2009

stunning composition...Thanks for sharing....well done! ! !

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Walking on Air is one of the best love poems I have read in such a long time. It sings with love and joy at the presence of another. Images to die for here Fay. 10 love Karin

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C. P. Sharma 01 December 2009

Fay, Certainly, your feet are not on ground Because your lost love you have found. CP

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David Harris 21 November 2009

Fay, this is a brilliantly awesome poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Daniel Kempson 19 November 2009

This is one of your best Fay straight from the heart 10 ++ Daniel

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