Walking By The River Poem by Zaini khalil

Walking By The River

Rating: 4.7


Walking by the river
I just realized
The way it is flowing
Its all so smooth

It is carrying with it
Boats and many other stuff
It is home to aquatic life
Providing them wih all the facilities to live

Just like this I again realize
Everything needs a shelter
But what about the people without shelter

Then I begin to wonder
How do they survive
How do they cope up
With changing seasons and changing climates

But God leaves no one without protection
He is the caring one
He is the guardian
He loves us all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kamran Qureshi 29 January 2013

So true! He provides for all, same as he tests us all by deliberately keeping some more fortunate than others.

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Td2makati Kelebogile 29 January 2013

true expression, i like it............. Good job

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Barbara Nixon 28 January 2013

Lovely poem, very thoughtful and written. Good work.

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Søren Valentine 28 January 2013

I liked this poem the imagery was nice as well as the message

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Hamid Negah 28 January 2013

very good poem, i loved it so much, keep writting.

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Ramesh Rai 13 March 2013

Sorry for delay. you have made a nice compose. keep it up my boy. may god bless you. top marks.

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X X Uniccjonr X X 15 February 2013

Smooth and soothing. A fragrance, and yet, tastefully faithful. I do love the idea.

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Akanksha Bhatt 02 February 2013

a very nice penned poem by you my friend.... yeah.. it is right that GOD is the Father of all of us.. He cares about each and every person in this whole world...! i liked the poem very much..! thanks for inviting..! :)

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Babatunde Aremu 01 February 2013

THANKS FOR THINKING ABOUT THE HOMELESS. tHIS IS VERY CONSIDERATE. I LIKE THE POEM

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Hazel Durham 31 January 2013

With God's help we have power and hope, you have got the message across so powerfully in this beautiful poem!

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