Walking Along The Sea Shore Poem by akram saqib

Walking Along The Sea Shore

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Walking along the seashore
I could think but no more

You were doing my flying hair
With briskly strides front and rear

Hiding behind and running along
Nothing then seems will happen wrong

But alas it was love that never lasts
In the world of creed and caste

You left me and at the same place
I often come to find my lost grace

Wednesday, August 26, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sherif Monem 04 March 2010

Very nice simple poem expresses passing by love.

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Seema Chowdhury 09 September 2009

i hope you get the love of your life. good luck just don't give up. happy ramadan.

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Indira Babbellapati 26 August 2009

the last two lines read great!

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Shams Tahir 26 August 2009

love is a truth and also betrayed love

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