Walking Poem by nader baheri

Walking

Rating: 5.0


I'm just walking
Walking in the moon light
Walking to evict the evils
Walking instead of crying

Walking for the hope
For committing suicide, finding a rope
Walking to get away from the fears and strangers

Walking in the moon light
kissing the mouth of an exotic
girl, drinking Koniak and say
I am not an alcoholic

I am just walking
Walking in the moon light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 22 October 2012

I hope sober and peace come pouring on your mind to purify your feeling as when the dew fall down while you walking toward moonlight...so what you feel is just a bliss and joy, to cheer the even it is dark with a hope of light..walking must walking on the road of hope and it will return you to the real destination, where you are belong to_Soul

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Asif Andalib 22 October 2012

I agree with Soul and hope your troubles will be gone soon. Lovely poem

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Shivani Misra 23 October 2012

Walk for the hope. Be a fighter, not a surviver. Dont walk for committing suicide. Dont walk away from life.. Face it. Be strong. :)

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Shivani Misra 23 October 2012

Walk for the hope. Be a fighter, not a surviver. Dont walk for committing suicide. Dont walk away from life.. Face it. Be strong. :)

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Ramesh Rai 23 October 2012

i was just to write the same what shivani has written otherwise a nice imagination

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Azadeh Salehian 01 November 2012

poet Nader Full of fantastic images... Gentle soul! tnx

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Eindaray Kyaw 26 October 2012

so many vivid facets of walking are clear and bright in your nice poem....Well done!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 24 October 2012

This kind of walking should be existence for all of us to think deeper and better in the actions that we will commit and the actions those are done around us_ Most of them are in justice actually_ and we will also face with the people who just ignore their own actions and their own rules, but they force other people to believe them. A GREAT WORK MY FRIEND! ! ! !

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Kelvin Owusu 24 October 2012

suicidal minds eye is blinded by fear of the unknown, walk towards and not away from life, positive the mind so beauty may shine, a great and positive piece in my opinion nicely done

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Allemagne Roßmann 23 October 2012

This is more musical...with the koniak perhaps more

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