Jesus James Llorico


Walk With Me - Poem by Jesus James Llorico

An empty road.... this peaceful night....
As evening breeze, blend with street lights

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Comments about Walk With Me by Jesus James Llorico

  • Gold Star - 4,607 Points Points Of View (9/15/2014 5:39:00 AM)

    Full of hopes...someday soon it will happen. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 29,046 Points Roseann Shawiak (9/4/2014 2:32:00 PM)

    Simply expressing a love you hope to have in the future is very beautiful, brought tears to my eyes because it is so endearing and tender. Fantastic poem, Jesus! ! Thank you for sharing your heart. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,349 Points Unwritten Soul (10/5/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    Stuck with the feeling you left here..great best mark for u :) _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Syd Barrett (9/25/2013 3:51:00 AM)

    Beautiful. bellissimo! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leonard Langberg (9/24/2013 1:15:00 PM)

    Cool and interesting poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tim Shivers (9/22/2013 2:13:00 AM)

    Inspiring beautiful artistic poem of joy and peace- -much enjoyment! .... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Helen Remegio (9/20/2013 11:16:00 PM)

    Great! it's a very beautiful poem...i love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philip Andermann (9/20/2013 10:59:00 PM)

    The beauty of this divine and gentle poem truly brought tears down my cheeks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 121 Points Sj Holland (8/18/2013 4:59:00 AM)

    This is my favorite stanza:

    ...Tell me then, that moment arise
    First time we meet, love in our eyes! ...

    The last stanza was a surprise. I thought all along that it was real, until the end. I hope it did come true for you though, and believe it did. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (6/12/2013 4:56:00 PM)

    so beautiful, so tender, so romantics fused with good rhythm and flow make this poem show a honest and intense emotions (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,724 Points Hazel Durham (6/7/2013 3:25:00 PM)

    So beautiful with such delicate and graceful rhythm and flow a gentle, dreamlike write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (6/6/2013 10:15:00 AM)

    a lovely write about youth and life. Something to talk about in later years. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Zubiya Surti (5/28/2013 10:16:00 AM)

    a very lovely poem, sir.thank you (Report) Reply










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