Wake Up... Poem by Randhir kaur

Wake Up...

Rating: 5.0


A commence
of dawn sinks
at dusk,
Ever mull
over, why d
earth is round?
A ritual of
religion and d
splendour of
lust,
Ever mull
over, why this
found?
A diety of
people n a rush
of gust,
Ever mull
over, why
people's
thought r
bound?
Nature is
natural n
believe is like a
rust,
Ever mull
over, why
falsity beauty
is on ground?
Today spurious
beauty is
immortal n
beauty is
scorn.
Entity frm d
flowers to d
celestial sight,
Every fair
object will lose
its authenic
born.
A date of
havoc is sooner
near with a
might,
The earth's
bosom wud
turn in sordid
boon with
mourn.
And wen
Mt.Everest will
bcum a
constant
shooting site., .,

Monday, August 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Beauty is immortal. The necessary things lays no purpose if u keep unnecessary things in ur life n around u... Live every moment..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 24 August 2015

why d earth is round, good one, thanks..

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 June 2016

A date of havoc is sooner near with a might! ! Nice work.

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Siddartha Montik 21 February 2017

Wonderful! ! Though short in terms every feeling is right.. The Everest Will look after it Over Hindustan! ! Nu\ice write! !

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Randhir Kaur 10 July 2016

Thank you Soul Watcher for the kind review..

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Soul Watcher 09 July 2016

I do not know how I reached to this poem, but what I am sure of is that I liked it.: -) Thanks for sharing Randhir

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Randhir Kaur 14 June 2016

Thank you Gajanan Sir for reading.

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Randhir Kaur 14 June 2016

Thanks Edward. Stay in touch.

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