Waiting, Still Waiting Poem by Eric Cockrell

Waiting, Still Waiting



i have been to the place where dignity calls,
heard the sounds of families running for cover.
felt the pounding of guns, smelled the stench of bodies,
watched men who hated theirselves in another.
saw ghouls counting money stained by blood,
saw priests counting bodies buried in mud.
felt the sting of the lie, the cold inside empty.
heard the groan of towns and burning cities.
both broke outside and broken inside.
where good men pray for the courage to die....

still the shout and the fury of freedom shakes...
tis the hand that gives and the hand that takes.
we are no more than the doubt and the ache...
waiting, still waiting, for the storm to break!

now who will lead and who will follow,
the path of yesterday dont lead to tomorrow.
the end of the world, the beginning of time.
while the sheep are lost and the goats are blind.
now the voices of children unborn crying,
for the mother slain and the father dying.
the howl of abandonment tears the sky,
the stink of poverty perfumed by the lie.
now the gods of men turn in disgust,
while the souls of men crumble to dust....

still the shout and the fury of freedom shakes....
tis the hand that gives and the hand that takes.
we are no more than the doubt and the ache...
waiting, still waiting, for the storm to break!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alla Simone 13 October 2012

Thanks for these strong, solid words firmly rooted in truth. An excellent message and illuminating voice is projected throughout. Excellent! Some lines that especially stood out were: where good men pray for the courage to die.... now who will lead and who will follow, the path of yesterday dont lead to tomorrow. the end of the world, the beginning of time. while the sheep are lost and the goats are blind. We have been living in the age of obscenity for a long time, though many refuse to acknowledge the constant exposure. Again, thanks.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 October 2012

A powerful piece of impassioned verse, Eric...Excellent rhyme scheme...awesome storyline...Freedom hath no superseders! ~FjcR~

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