Waiting In Love Poem by Aftab Alam

Waiting In Love

Rating: 5.0


My feelings that you will come: -

When I sunk deep in thy memories
Slightest noise is so heavy to seize
My slumber, peeps through the slit
And desires silently weep and spit

My feeling when you not turned to me: -

Waiting: a jar within it, thy face I keep
My dreams and thy memories haunts and I weep

Like hungry baby, uncared
Jar must be broken unheard

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It become circumferential and wait is its center...dream hung like a cloud or put in a jar
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 23 May 2013

this is fantastic poem, it can be compared with your creator as well as you beloved.. nice 9

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 May 2013

Hmm dats a fine sublime musing poem. Brill how u poetically say u kept d dreams in a jar. Tnx 4 yor nice coments.

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