Waiting For Sorrow`s Reply Poem by swagathnath rajeswari
Waiting For Sorrow`s Reply
Time invited sorrow........
Oh! no one in the world welcomes you
You dissolve them slowly and muddle them
make them anxious and put them noxious!
You shake the souls and the shadows
freightened them!
dubious thoughts crop up in mind
behind the scene they feel painful sorrow
which they did not invite in them!
Oh! all the feelings dissolve in you
the minutes that count
mount the sorrow where is the joy
the dark in you swallows the light
Oh! time have you invited sorrow in me
dissolves me crumbles me a heap
fear engulf in me and
waiting for sorrow`s reply
when did you go
by the passage of time give me joy and
shine let the rays of hope sprout in me! !
Let the time invite joy and shine......
You have to go further in writing poems. well written needs polish. Read many books of poets like robert frost, keats et. al. you certainly have the poetic sense and mind of presentation. Have a nice day and blessings from god to elevate in the future.
well sorrow is the greatest fire in which you mettle is tested and you comout as pure gold.....lovely write indeed
well sorrow is the greatest fire in which you mettle is tested and you comout as pure gold.....lovely write indeed
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I would like to translate this poem
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Dear Rajeshwari, You have a natural knack for writing.To improve, you are to read more. However, at your age what you are writing is good, You got a tendency for descriptive poems. Why not see sorrow as a testing module of God by which He verifies our tenacity, honesty, withstand suffering and stick to all the good qualities.May be your poem re-written by you will be a gem.I read all your poems today. Some of them are really good keep on writing. Grandpa still offers you 10