Waiting For Her Poem by Yasser Koor

Waiting For Her

Rating: 5.0


The sweet darkness falls
And the night touches my skin
I feel her comin
I know it’s god willin

I saw her in my dreams
Dressed in dark desires
And she was listening to my screams

Her shadow was near to me
I pray she is here to take me

Her shadow was black, no I think brown
The shadow as the shadow of royal crown

She told me with beautiful sound
Be strong babe, I’m still around

I know that voice
But it is not my choice

I hope I see her face
I hope all of that is mace

I can hear the voice again
“I will release you from your pain”

She is stalker of my dreams
She is the queen of my dreams

I shall deliver my soul
I shall give her my blood
What she is waiting for?

I think she is my soul mate
I think she controls my fate
I’ll complete my life with her
I’ll looking for her. I can’t wait

I can see the hope in her eyes
She told me “please don’t cry”

I know her smell
I hope I’m doing well

I don’t know her
But I know she is there
And I’ll be waiting for her

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
sara }i{ 15 October 2008

So beautiful and I'm sure she's gonna come to u great poem

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Kesav Easwaran 16 October 2008

good write...good imagination behind...the ever waiting black lover...good piece 10

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Little Hatila ;) 16 October 2008

Yasser, be sure she will come to you coz one day she will realize how much you have care for her.......very fantastic job...10 Hataw

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Egi David Perdana 15 October 2008

this a wonderful poems this a great stanza for me

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Yaseen Anwer 15 October 2008

Extreamly beautiful.....Well done

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tara star 04 May 2009

vvvvvvvvvvvvvv beautiful poem....keep writing...

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 25 November 2008

that's what our feeling to whom we love the most. very well done! keep writing!

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Blue Eyes 28 October 2008

i love ur poem and all but there is one hinch that does not matter so much.''stalker''''the stalker''any way i loved the romantic atmosphere of this poem.it has really touched my heart.

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Mohammad Al-kurdi 22 October 2008

i see a story mixed with the dark feelings with the whitened hope. i see contrast that must last for going fast and not for the past............so cool

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&&angel4ever && 16 October 2008

I FEEL A DULL MYSTERIOUS ATMOSPHERE AS U WAITING NOT FOR UR LOVER BUT SOMETHING ELSE IT THE WAY OF WRITING KEEP WORKING WE NEED A DIFFERENT THEMES ALSO

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