The sweet darkness falls
And the night touches my skin
I feel her comin
I know it’s god willin
I saw her in my dreams
Dressed in dark desires
And she was listening to my screams
Her shadow was near to me
I pray she is here to take me
Her shadow was black, no I think brown
The shadow as the shadow of royal crown
She told me with beautiful sound
Be strong babe, I’m still around
I know that voice
But it is not my choice
I hope I see her face
I hope all of that is mace
I can hear the voice again
“I will release you from your pain”
She is stalker of my dreams
She is the queen of my dreams
I shall deliver my soul
I shall give her my blood
What she is waiting for?
I think she is my soul mate
I think she controls my fate
I’ll complete my life with her
I’ll looking for her. I can’t wait
I can see the hope in her eyes
She told me “please don’t cry”
I know her smell
I hope I’m doing well
I don’t know her
But I know she is there
And I’ll be waiting for her
good write...good imagination behind...the ever waiting black lover...good piece 10
Yasser, be sure she will come to you coz one day she will realize how much you have care for her.......very fantastic job...10 Hataw
that's what our feeling to whom we love the most. very well done! keep writing!
i love ur poem and all but there is one hinch that does not matter so much.''stalker''''the stalker''any way i loved the romantic atmosphere of this poem.it has really touched my heart.
i see a story mixed with the dark feelings with the whitened hope. i see contrast that must last for going fast and not for the past............so cool
I FEEL A DULL MYSTERIOUS ATMOSPHERE AS U WAITING NOT FOR UR LOVER BUT SOMETHING ELSE IT THE WAY OF WRITING KEEP WORKING WE NEED A DIFFERENT THEMES ALSO
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So beautiful and I'm sure she's gonna come to u great poem