Waiting Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Waiting

Rating: 4.9


For a heart in love the life is a boon,
A glimpse of beloved is a glimpse of the moon,
Waiting for hours in emotional tide,
The lover when thinks to commit suicide,
And the beloved not yet at the meeting sight,
The evening grown up in a lonely night,
The stars whisper he's insane in love,
But his firmness not at all is wane in love,
His heart is sure she will come at last,
Fleeting of mind a complete contrast,
She will come, she will not, the petal now last,
To end at the latter, a deadly blast,
Quickly he said she will not she will come,
Cheating in love so sweet and awesome,
I'm sorry my love I am really so late,
He heard her voice at the garden's gate.

Friday, October 31, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: waiting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Have you ever waited for someone, if so, you can understand it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saheb Mohapatra 31 October 2014

love clearly means patience which is created only through a indestructible relation or faith...........a mesmerizing poem.......good use of words..................very heart-touching............THANKS

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 October 2014

A Beautiful poem. Very true said, waiting is like killing time. Many thoughts which comes to mind especially while waiting, is beautifully expressed in this poem. I hope everyone had waited at least once or anytime in their lifetime. It really a sweet waiting, as it tests the patience of one who is waiting. Loved reading it.

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Neela Nath Das 31 October 2014

waiting for someone you love means taking test of your patience.A lovely poem.

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Heather Wilkins 02 November 2014

sad but beautifully written how long must he wait

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Salini Nair 02 November 2014

Waiting for hours in emotional tide, The lover when thinks to commit suicide, ..........................pain of love is the greatest pain...............beautiful

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Valsa George 01 November 2014

So, at last she has come, putting an end to his mounting anxiety and doubt! Interesting poem charged with sparks of love!

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Tadasha Tripathy 01 November 2014

For a heart in love the life is a boon, A glimpse of beloved is a glimpse of the moon, Beautifully designed. I liked it very much

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Khalida Bano Ali 31 October 2014

A sweet and beautiful melody on loving waiting of a beloved.

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