Waiting Poem by Hazel Durham
Waiting
Waiting to see your powerful presence,
Smiling, satin blue eyes that wipe's clean away any lies,
Truth flowing like a river with strong currents,
Of desires divine, falling, sparkling with such might
From this great height,
The soft touch of the breeze is you,
The sweet song of the birds is you, when you're happy,
The majestic ocean is you, determined and strong,
The skies above hold your hidden past,
Locked inside marshmallow clouds,
Heavy with rain, moving slowly across grey, washed skies,
Ready to burst open with unresolved issues,
Tears frequent in the corner's of your eyes,
Like light rainfall cleansing,
My mind of jumbled emotions,
You sorting them out with your pure look of love,
That saturate's and feed's my weary soul,
Bringing me evergreen thoughts.
You persued me with your country charm,
And with determination you fought
For me, a never give up attitude, is what you taught.
Just an ordinary man with an extraodinary gift,
To seep deep into my open pores soaking my complex brain.
I listen to the sound of your train arriving,
As i wait with tingling happiness,
In our meeting point a romantic leafy lane.
this poem is studded with many beautiful lines...very dramatic and passionate write! ! !
a beautiful poem filled with many amazing lines. great imagery
A beautiful poem building a romantic aura and bringing out the charisma of an ordinary man with an extra ordinary gift! The tingling happiness is felt all through!
Waiting...it's so meaningful to me...wait by the help of time will prove and show lots of things well written
The beginning lines of the poem are so touching. Let me cite... Waiting to see your powerful presence, Smiling, satin blue eyes that wipe's clean away any lies, Truth flowing like a river with strong currents, Of desires divine, falling, sparkling with such might From this great height, The soft touch of the breeze is you, A beautiful poem brilliantly expressed.
Feelings flow freely in the eloquently expressed exposition!
I listen to the sound of your train arriving, As i wait with tingling happiness, In our meeting point a romantic leafy lane. A beautiful poem having so many beautiful lines like above................10
So much feeling in your words. Pure emotion, presented with such honesty. Always an entertaining read. ! 8 great comments & 7 votes. Wonder why people take the trouble to comment yet can't be bothered to give you a rating.
This is certainly one of your best, and indeed one of the best in this forum.10/10. 'The soft touch of the breeze is you, The sweet song of the birds is you, when you're happy, The majestic ocean is you, determined and strong, ' What a romantic way of seeing one's love! 'I listen to the sound of your train arriving, As i wait with tingling happiness, In our meeting point a romantic leafy lane.' Simply amazing! You have given a 'tingling happiness' to all the lovers of the world with these lines!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 12:55:13 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Hi Hazel such beautiful words wow i am in awe of your ability to tell the story of this love well done I am delighted to hear from a fellow irish poet will be reading and enjoying more of your poems