' Waiting ' Poem by Ency Bearis

' Waiting '

Rating: 2.9


Had you ever experienced sitting in a place
with lots of people in this space
waiting?
Patiently waiting?

The space with full of drama of life
The place with all walks of life
The place of many faces
Square face, oval face
Comical face, crying face

The place of different culture
The place of different posture
Fetal position, cuddling, sleeping
Napping one eye shot, sitting
Spacing, breath panting, grimacing

Its like in a stage, but not a Theater
But people asking help and care
In this lobby of Emergency Room
Persons who are in impending doom

The sick, and non sick
With tic - tac of the clock
With inquisitive vision
Curiosity, speculation

The significance of living
Hope to be alive and kicking
Hope that everything will be fine
Hope gloomy days, sun will shine

And, may God bring the miracle and sunlight
with rainbow of felicity, well being, bright life
Anxiously enduring
Waiting and waiting

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pari Dharawat 09 November 2011

I loved these lines, In this lobby of Emergency Room Persons who are in impending doom wonderful choice of words, and excellent writing, truely poetic with a grim face - 5 paragraphs; and a hopeful heart - last two paragraphs. Keep writing

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Rachel Butler 12 June 2010

'The significance of living' Rachel Ann Butler

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 11 June 2010

‘Its like in a stage, but not a Theater’ …its Theater [lolol] without any rehearsal...direction…live vibe vibrant…drama in real life...what didn’t escape your eyes…fine and lively poem… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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