Waiting Poem by Meggie Gultiano

Waiting

Rating: 3.5


Waiting


Sparkling ripples on the water
blessed by the morning sun.
The little birds that fly
through the freeways of the sky
as I stand here waiting
for my love to come.

I have waited for so long
My tears are now dried
The sun has now sets in the east
Rainbows falling at my feet
waiting for my love to come

Our home is cold
The trees are bare
The wind has gone in rage
Not a shadow, nor single footstep
i am waiting

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 04 January 2009

What a lovely evocative piece this is Meggie...thank you so much for sharing it with us....Fi

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C T Heart 04 January 2009

The imagery used was great, finely crafted with zeal.

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Thad Wilk 04 January 2009

A lovely and touching poem Meggie, melancholy - an sweet ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 January 2009

sweet...sweet...sweet writes.... so lovely..patiently waiting for someone..... very touching....bring lightness to my heart lines sweetly flows.... like a breeze of love caressing one's heart.. anyone you reads your piece will surely feel...10+++++ my friend

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 January 2009

Imageful write, young lass...Smooth to the eyes & poetic senses....Meggie...you never disappoint! F j R 2009

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Vaibhav Pandey 18 January 2009

nice and flowing piece.. I wishyour wait stops forever.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 17 January 2009

a long patient wait along with nature...lovely 10

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This poem is like a song calling love to you. We all have to wait sometimes and I could relate to your flowing words. Well written Meggie. Karin Anderson

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